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Jun

Aberaţie insuficientă

   Posted by: Palconi Valentin   in Literatura

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Ce motive,dragă?!

Nu ţi-e suficient?

Tot am asteptat sa tragă,

Fir-ar al dracului de pacient!

Am aşteptat să fie violent,

Si-am asteptat,la naiba!

Dar tot n-a tuns iarba…

Inca nu ţi-e suficient?!

autor: Crăineanu Florentin

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7 comments so far

floryanna
 1 

bravo Flooo! lovely poem & its structure!

July 1st, 2008 at 17:49
Meda
 2 

Wow!!!Super tare…Te puuupik dulce:*:*:*:*:*:*.Take care!!!:*:*:*:*

July 8th, 2008 at 14:32
Walter
 3 

Interesting enough, I just blogged about comments and moderation here at IT Toolbox. I was reading a comment and this post came up (based on topic) from more than a year ago.

August 30th, 2008 at 21:53
fabiana
 4 

un adevarat talent………

September 12th, 2008 at 09:42
Ebay hot items
 5 

Very interesting site, nice design, greetings :)

September 12th, 2008 at 19:38
Ярослав Павлюченко
 6 

Премного благодарен за статью, а это тема :) В мемориз однозначно, пригодится! :)

July 10th, 2009 at 03:24
BoлшэбникЪ
 7 

Ну и что, результат есть ?

July 29th, 2009 at 11:55

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